Letter Of Inquiry

In my English Business subject I created an Inquiry Letter. 

I thought this letter far from perfect.. But, at least Im trying..
I hope it will be useful for everybody who read this :)

LUCKSY COSMETICS

MARGONDA STREET, 150

DEPOK                                                                                                         

October 15, 2012

Mrs. Alisa William
Viva Cosmetics
Alamanda Street, 121
Jakarta Pusat

Dear Mrs. William:

I read an advertisement from Aneka Yess Magazine about your cosmetic products, Viva Milk Cleanser and Viva Face Tonic. As the owner of the cosmetics shop, I thought the products are great interest to me because your products are one of The Best Brand Platinum at 2011.

I would be interest in selling your products in my shop, “Lucksy Cosmetics”.

Would you please send to me the catalog about all kinds of your products and the proposed list prices? I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with sales representative to discuss volume discounts.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Sincerely yours,



Lucksy Dwilaras
Owner